My name is DaQuaan I'm 18 I'm A libra I play basketball I goto TMA Hs I play varsity boys basketball I love school I want to goto college
Both my parents have masters degrees and I love to eat and I live with my dad and my aunt and my little brother Bryan . I like to listen to Aubrey music to hype me up before my games. I live in the Bronx and I'm spoiled and I'm the youngest on both sides . I love to eat junk food and I do not know how to cook and my dad is a teacher here at TMA Hs and my older brothers live down south. I am a senior in high school. I am my mothers twin and I also love fine and unique artwork. I want to play basketball in college. TMA Hs stands for Thurgood Marshall Academy and it is located in Harlem. I also want to be far away from home when I go to college.
Aubrey who? That is a good place to include a link to that person's wikipedia page or youtube video so other people can appreciate what you are talking about.
ReplyDelete250 is a word count minimum. You have some great points that you could have easily explained to hit your word count. For instance, what type of music? Why go far away? How many siblings do you actually have?
He goes to our school and I have 8 siblings and hip hop and I want to go far away so I can be independent and on my own.
Deleteyou made very great points. How long have you been playing ball? Why do you want to go far away for college?
ReplyDeleteWow great stuff. I see that you want to be independent and on your own. How do you think you can accomplish that being so far away from home? Are you going to get a job? What kind of job would you be interested in?
ReplyDeleteThank you and practice how to be independent now and if i have time then yes I will get a job and hopefully something on campus
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